EtsyEXAMPLE 01
Confirm the destination in the action
Etsy includes delivery context in the final purchasing step. The detail helps a buyer verify where the order will go before committing.
Specificity
Concrete language makes consequences easier to predict.
01 / UNDERSTAND
The idea
Specific wording tells people what an action does, what information is needed and what outcome to expect. Replace vague labels with language that matches the task. The detail should be accurate and useful.
Specific actions and questions can feel more purposeful and make results easier to predict. A concrete payment label, delivery destination or error explanation can answer questions before a person commits. Use precise information that genuinely exists; extra detail is unhelpful when it is inaccurate or exposes information unnecessarily.
02 / RECOGNISE
See it in real products.
Examples of how the principle can appear in an interface.
03 / CONNECT
Why it matters.
Concrete labels can reduce uncertainty and help people give more accurate answers. The detail should describe a real action or consequence rather than create false confidence.
Possible influences to investigate, rather than guaranteed outcomes for every product.
04 / APPLY
Put it into practice.
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Name the action and object
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State important consequences
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Use examples for unfamiliar requirements
05 / EXPLORE WITH UPSLIDE
Apply it with Upslide.
Use a practical guide, read a deeper explanation, or examine a related Upslide project.
The SaaS Redesign Research Framework
Use the industry’s real language to explain states, actions and consequences precisely.
UX Writing Books for Designers: Content and Conversation
7 mins readPractise clearer interface writing with an explicit task, consequence and review step.
Review the clearer document lifecycle in NDIR.
CONNECT THE IDEAS
Related principles
Keep exploring
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